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@@ -2,10 +2,12 @@
 
 EasyPG is yet another GnuPG interface for Emacs.  It consists of two parts:
 
-- "The EasyPG Assistant" which provides basic GUI of GnuPG
-- "The EasyPG Library" which enables use of various features of GnuPG
+- "The EasyPG Assistant"
+  A GUI frontend of GnuPG
+- "The EasyPG Library"
+  A library to interact with GnuPG
 
-NOTE: EasyPG is neither a fork nor a re-implementation of Gnus/PGG.
+NOTE: EasyPG is neither a fork nor a re-implementation of PGG.
 
 * Requirements
 
@@ -24,7 +26,7 @@ Add the following line to your ~/.emacs
 
   (require 'epa-setup)
 
-Then you can browse your keyring by M-x epa-list-keys.  In addition,
+Then you can browse your keyring by `M-x epa-list-keys'.  In addition,
 you can do some cryptographic operations on dired.
 
   M-x dired
@@ -32,26 +34,26 @@ you can do some cryptographic operations on dired.
   : e (or M-x epg-dired-do-encrypt)
   (select recipients and click [OK])
 
-* Security consideration
+* Security
 
-** `call-process-region' writes data in region to a temporary file
+There are security pitfalls around Emacs.
+
+** Passphrase may leak to a temporary file.
 
 `call-process-region' writes data in region to a temporary file.
-EasyPG does *not* use `call-process-region' to communicate with a gpg
+The EasyPG Library does not use `call-process-region' to communicate with a gpg
 subprocess.
 
-** `(fillarray string 0)' is not enough to clear passphrases
+** Passphrase may be stolen from a core file.
 
 If Emacs crashes and dumps core, Lisp strings in memory are also
 dumped within the core file.  `read-passwd' function clears passphrase
 strings by `(fillarray string 0)'.  However, Emacs performs compaction
 in gc_sweep phase.  If GC happens before `fillarray', passphrase
 strings may be moved elsewhere in memory.  Therefore, passphrase
-caching in Elisp is generally a bad idea.  The EasyPG Library dares to
-disable passphrase caching.
-
-Fortunately, there is more secure way to cache passphrases - use
-gpg-agent.
+caching in elisp is generally a bad idea.
 
-Elisp programs can set `epg-context-passphrase-callback' to cache
-user's passphrases, it is not recommended though.
+The EasyPG Library dares to disable passphrase caching.  Fortunately,
+there is more secure way to cache passphrases - use gpg-agent.  Elisp
+programs can set `epg-context-passphrase-callback' to cache user's
+passphrases, it is not recommended though.